Saturday, July 10, 2021

The Apology Project (Jeanette Escudero)

Why I have this book: It was a freebie in the Amazon First Picks program. I read the few reviews (because First Picks come out before the books are actually released, so not many have read them yet), and one review made me think it was fairly clean.

I wouldn't classify it as clean. There was plenty of swearing (including F-bombs), and it starts out with what we assume is going to be a drunk one-night stand. (It's not descriptive, but it's still obvious.) I was ready to quit the book early on, but for some reason I kept reading. I think it was because the writing was super easy to get into.

In any case, I ended up enjoying the story quite a bit. Like I said, the writing made it easy to get swallowed up in the story, and I liked the experiences the protagonist had with her family, her (newly found) extended family, and the people she reached out to as part of her "apology project." 

I honestly would have given this four solid stars if there wasn't the casual sex (again, not described) and the swearing. The story itself was great. Because it wasn't clean (and because those things were definitely not needed to make the storyline work), I only gave it three stars on Goodreads.

Not really clean. Described above, and I'll add that there are a handful of instances of using the Lord's name as an expression of exclamation, and there's way too much drinking.

Friday, July 2, 2021

The Moses Lake Series (Lisa Wingate)

There are four books in the series:

Larkspur Cove

Blue Moon Bay

Firefly Island

Wildwood Creek

Why I have these books: I actually read the first book in the series a few years ago, but never moved on to the others. I ended up buying a four-books-in-one ebook last month when I was still in my "I need a light read" mode. (I might still be there, to be honest.)

On Goodreads, I gave all the books three stars except one. Blue Moon Bay only got two stars. I don't remember why... I think I felt like it was a little contrived by the end.

I also would like to reiterate that these authors need me to edit their books for them. Not as the main editor, maybe, but rather as a "final read" editor. I could catch things like the overuse of words such as "caliche" and "diaphanous." I mean, they are impressive words, but because they aren't commonly used words, they become a distraction when they are used over and over again in a book (or in a series of books). I also would catch things like when you put events out of order. This just causes confusion for the reader who then has to go back and forth to figure out what is happening.

Otherwise, I did enjoy the series. I think the first and last books were my favorites, even though they were very different from each other.

Clean.